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Agree and disagree of watching TV

Agree and disagree of watching TV K3VY1
I'm agree. In the fact we may use our time for it. In our time not every person watches tv. But the pandemic has caused people to stay at home has caused some people to watch and being lazy, some of them watch tv all day and night and don't keep time. London students prove that, watching tv for at least 3 hours a resulted in as much as 10% decrease in verbal memory. In my view, people that watching tv or use gutjets are very lazy. They are being lazy at this time. Normal time for watching tv is 2 hours. In my opinion, tv has not only harmful, but also useful things. For the help of tv we can know about news and sport. In conclusion tv needs to be able to use and know the boundaries.
I'm
agree
. In the fact we may
use
our
time
for it. In our
time
not every person
watches
tv
.
But
the pandemic has caused
people
to stay at home has caused
some
people
to
watch
and being lazy,
some
of them
watch
tv
all day and night and don't
keep
time
.
London students
prove that, watching
tv
for at least 3 hours a resulted in as much as 10% decrease in verbal memory. In my view,
people
that watching
tv
or
use
gutjets
are
very
lazy. They are being lazy at this
time
. Normal
time
for watching
tv
is 2 hours. In my opinion,
tv
has not
only
harmful,
but
also
useful things. For the
help
of
tv
we can know about news and sport.
In conclusion
tv
needs to be able to
use
and know the boundaries.
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IELTS essay Agree and disagree of watching TV

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  American English
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139 words
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