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Agree and disagree of watching TV

Agree and disagree of watching TV K3VY1
I'm agree. In the fact we may use our time for it. In our time not every person watches tv. But the pandemic has caused people to stay at home has caused some people to watch and being lazy, some of them watch tv all day and night and don't keep time. London students prove that, watching tv for at least 3 hours a resulted in as much as 10% decrease in verbal memory. In my view, people that watching tv or use gutjets are very lazy. They are being lazy at this time. Normal time for watching tv is 2 hours. In my opinion, tv has not only harmful, but also useful things. For the help of tv we can know about news and sport. In conclusion tv needs to be able to use and know the boundaries.
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not every person
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the pandemic has caused
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to stay at home has caused
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and being lazy,
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of them
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all day and night and don't
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prove that, watching
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for at least 3 hours a resulted in as much as 10% decrease in verbal memory. In my view,
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that watching
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lazy. They are being lazy at this
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for watching
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is 2 hours. In my opinion,
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has not
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harmful,
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useful things. For the
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of
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we can know about news and sport.
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needs to be able to
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and know the boundaries.

IELTS essay Agree and disagree of watching TV

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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