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Nowday advertisements from the market are growing very fast, and buyers are chellenged by them. There are many different way customers impress by compney’s strategy, some are related with reality and some are misleding both of the views disscuss and what measure can be taken to protect them are disscuss further. Disscussing my first point, the fundamental reasons of adevertising is to cath the buyers and sales them their products and take profit as well, salers use many platform to sale their products. In current time social midea is very popular for that compnay’s use famouse personality like modals and sports related person to promote their products on social midea platforms as well as on televison and redio because they knew consumers influenced by them and grabs their products. For instance virat kohli advrtised nike and audi on different types of platforms like televison and social midea pages instagram, facebook etc. However, there are many drawbakes of advertisement as well who mislead the mass. For example alochol and tobcco is harmful for health in these case government should take action on that or creat policy tp restrict tham because it is harmful for people and affects their family. Tobacco and alcohol ads are mostly attrect youngsters and they are the future of nation. Not only tobacco and alcohol advertisemnt is harmful but in current time children related advrtis also misguid us for example, famous biscuit brand parle show one of their best biscuit add that when child eat biscuit and convert in to the superhero. This type of senseless add make children ful to aware them parents have to explain that it is just advertise not reality or we teach them what is real or what is fake. To conclude with tis essay, advertisement is important to sales companys product as well as many of them harmful in many ways. Government have to take action on them in some advertise parents have to take measure on children.
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very
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fast
, and buyers are
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chellenged
by them. There are
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many
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different
way customers impress by
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compney
’s strategy,
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some
are related
with reality and
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misleding
both of the views
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disscuss
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point, the fundamental reasons of
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adevertising
is to
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cath
the buyers and sales them their
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products
and take profit as
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,
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salers
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use
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many
platform to sale their
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products
. In
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current
time social
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midea
is
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very
popular for that
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compnay
’s
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use
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famouse
personality like modals and sports related person to promote their
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products
on social
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midea
platforms as
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well
as on
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televison
and
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redio
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because
they knew consumers influenced by them and grabs their
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products
.
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virat
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kohli
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advrtised
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nike
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audi
on
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different
types of platforms like
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and social
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midea
pages
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instagram
,
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facebook
etc.

However
, there are
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many
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drawbakes
of advertisement as
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well
who mislead the mass.
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alochol
and
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tobcco
is
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harmful
for health in these case
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government
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creat
policy
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restrict
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tham
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it is
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for
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people
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mostly
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youngsters and
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tobacco and alcohol
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advertisemnt
is
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harmful
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in
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parle
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one of their best biscuit
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that when child eat biscuit and convert in to the superhero. This type of senseless
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children
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ful
to aware them parents
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have to
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explain
that it is
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advertise not
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reality or
we teach them what is real or what is fake.

To conclude
with
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essay, advertisement is
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important
to sales
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companys
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of them
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in
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ways.
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have
to take action on them in
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advertise parents
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have to
take measure on children.
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IELTS essay consumer are faced with icreasing numbers of advertisement? what measures can be taken to protect them?

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
327 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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