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Despite the development and evolution in agriculture, millions of people still starving and lack nutrition.

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Despite the development and evolution in agriculture, millions of people still starving and lack nutrition. The factors for this problem are the limit of resources and climate changes. The essay shows you about the issue and how to tackle this problem. Firstly, One of the main factors for the rise in world hunger is the weather changes. The sudden weather change will affect the crops and the production of food. In extreme weather such as arid, drought, the climate is regularly changing rapidly. People facing food shortages and they can’t cultivate. It leads to malnutrition. Another reason is war and conflict, people who live there will depend on it, they have to move to a new place and have an unsustainable resource of food. The government should fix this problem in order to reduce world hunger. They must ban the conflict which is meaningless

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 you about the issue and how to tackle this problem.

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