Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills at the work place.Others think that the true function of a

some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills at the work place. Others think that the true function of a gWxQd
In the last two three decades, the awarness regarding university education has certainly gained momentum. This has driven the experts to debate whether the universities should continue to be conventional and just impact knowledge or should thes institutions also keep up the pace of the dynamic world, by moulding the students vocationally. If asked to support, I would choose that universities should provide students with knowledge and skills for the warkplace. My opinion is eloborated further. The strongest argument to my view is that of the existing demand. By this, I mean that the job market is ready with ample of apportunities for work even for the fresher. However, the companies do not have much time to train their new employyes from the scratch. This demands an attitude of the candidate to walk in with a good knowledge of the work and a readiness for a smooth transition to a proffesional from a smooth transition to a proffesional from a student. Such a shift can happen only if the students were imparted work skills while at school
In the last two three decades, the
Possible spelling mistake found.
awarness
regarding university education has
certainly
gained momentum. This has driven the experts to debate whether the universities should continue to be conventional and
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
just
impact knowledge or should
Possible spelling mistake found.
thes
institutions
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
keep
up the pace of the dynamic world, by
Possible spelling mistake. 'moulding' is British English.
moulding
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
vocationally
. If asked to support, I would choose that universities should provide
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
with knowledge and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
for the
Possible spelling mistake found.
warkplace
. My opinion is
Possible spelling mistake found.
eloborated
further
.

The strongest argument to my view is that of the existing demand. By this, I mean that the job market is ready with ample of
Possible spelling mistake found.
apportunities
for work even for the fresher.
However
, the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
companies
do not have much time to train their new
Possible spelling mistake found.
employyes
from the scratch. This demands an attitude of the candidate to walk in with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
knowledge of the work and a readiness for a smooth transition to a
Possible spelling mistake found.
proffesional
from a smooth transition to a
Possible spelling mistake found.
proffesional
from a
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
student
. Such a shift can happen
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
if the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
students
were imparted
work
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
while at
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
school
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills at the work place. Others think that the true function of a

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
176 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • some people think universities should provide graduates with the knowledge and skills at the work place.Others think that the true function of a