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You should spend about 45 minutes on this task. Despite knowing that drinking alcoholics is bad for their health, people never stop consuming them. What are the main reasons for this trend? What solutions could you suggest? Give any relevant example if necessary. You should write at least 250 words

Despite knowing that drinking alcoholics is bad for their health, people never stop consuming them. What are the main reasons for this trend? What solutions could you suggest? Give any relevant example if necessary. K3RJ1
It is apparent nowadays that due to some drawbacks of alcoholics, the consumption of it never decreases and is used by numerous people. There are a number of reasons behind this view and several solutions should be adopted to improve the situation. There are two primary reasons why people never try to stop themselves from drinking alcoholic products. One reason is that humans tend to look for something new to push up their inspiration or to express other things inside. This can be from many aspects in life but cannot say because of lack of confidence; these individuals need alcoholics to help them to speak out everything. For example, when feeling sad, almost everyone consumes some and expresses it with their friends, family and anyone they believe. Furthermore, many people always force someone to drink alcohol even though they are trying to reject it. This can be explained by the fact that the boss and coworker from the company usually have a party after finishing their work, and many others have to come with them without rejection. As a consequence, this will make the alcoholics which are consumed every year increase, with more and more consumers deeping in their bad habits. Fortunately, several measures could have been taken to prevent this problem. One solution to this problem is having a heavy tax on those using alcoholic products and fine if someone is trying to force others to drink it. This will prevent the increasing consumption of alcoholics, in addition, there are no situations where tragic accidents caused by alcoholics. Another feasible solution to this problem would be for the government to have a program that encourages people to avoid alcoholics on social media or television. With the internet, people will be able to access some knowledge about bad effects, for instance, by giving them bad effects, people will see that alcoholics are not a substance that is good for their health. In conclusion, it is clear that there are various reasons for why people never try to stop drinking any kind of alcohol, and steps need to be taken to tackle this problem. Should we prevent ourselves from drinking, life will be better.
It is apparent nowadays that due to
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some
drawbacks of
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alcoholics
, the consumption of it never decreases and is
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used
by numerous
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people
. There are a number of
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reasons
behind this view and several solutions should
be adopted
to
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improve
the situation.

There are two primary
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reasons
why
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people
never try to
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stop
themselves from drinking
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alcoholic
products. One
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reason
is that humans tend to look for something new to push up their inspiration or to express other things inside. This can be from
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many
aspects in life
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but
cannot say
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because
of lack of confidence; these individuals need
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alcoholics
to
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help
them to speak out everything.
For example
, when feeling sad, almost everyone consumes
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some
and expresses it with their friends, family and anyone they believe.
Furthermore
,
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many
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people
always force someone to drink alcohol
even though
they are trying to reject it. This can be
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explained
by the fact that the boss and coworker from the
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company
usually
have a party after finishing their work, and
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many
others
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have to
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come
with them without rejection. As a consequence, this will
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make
the
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alcoholics
which
are consumed
every year increase, with more and more consumers
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deeping
in their
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bad
habits.

Fortunately
, several measures could have
been taken
to
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prevent
this
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problem
. One solution to this
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problem
is having a heavy tax on those using
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alcoholic
products and fine if someone is trying to force others to drink it. This will
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prevent
the increasing consumption of
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alcoholics
,
in addition
, there are no situations where tragic accidents caused by
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alcoholics
. Another feasible solution to this
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problem
would be for the
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government
to have a program that encourages
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people
to avoid
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alcoholics
on social media or television. With the internet,
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people
will be able to access
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some
knowledge about
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bad
effects,
for instance
, by giving them
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bad
effects,
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people
will
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see
that
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alcoholics
are not a substance
that is
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good
for their health.

In conclusion
, it is
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clear
that there are various
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reasons
for why
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people
never try to
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stop
drinking any kind of alcohol, and steps need to
be taken
to tackle this
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problem
. Should we
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prevent
ourselves from drinking, life will be better.
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IELTS essay Despite knowing that drinking alcoholics is bad for their health, people never stop consuming them. What are the main reasons for this trend? What solutions could you suggest? Give any relevant example if necessary.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
363 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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