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DESPITE A LOT OF EFFORT, MANY STUDENTS STILL FACE BULLYING AT SCHOOL AND ONLINE. WHAT CAN SOCIETY DO TO HELP?

DESPITE A LOT OF EFFORT, MANY STUDENTS STILL FACE BULLYING AT SCHOOL AND ONLINE. WHAT CAN SOCIETY DO TO HELP? XyDrN
Next, bullying is a worrying issue, as it is becoming increasingly prevalent that against students nowadays. Bullying of students in school sometimes came from harsh parenting practices or sibling bullying. For example, when they at school, they may think their behavior is normal because they come from families or other settings where everyone regularly gets angry and shouts or call each other names. That is the way they have been treated from their families all of the times. To ensure that bullying prevention efforts are successful, all school staff must be alert with their student’s family background. The teacher or counselor must be professional by not assuming the kids too early and put all fault to one kid. So, all school staff need to be trained on what bullying is, what the school’s policies and rules are, and how to enforce the rules to prevent student from bullying others.
Next
,
bullying
is a worrying issue, as it is becoming
increasingly
prevalent that against
students
nowadays.
Bullying
of
students
in
school
sometimes
came from harsh parenting practices or sibling
bullying
.
For example
, when they at
school
, they may
think
their behavior is normal
because
they
come
from families or other settings where everyone
regularly
gets
angry and shouts or call each other names.
That is
the way they have
been treated
from their families
all of the
times. To ensure that
bullying
prevention efforts are successful, all
school
staff
must
be alert with their
student’s
family background. The teacher or counselor
must
be professional by not assuming the kids too early and put all fault to one kid.
So
, all
school
staff need to
be trained
on what
bullying
is, what the
school’s
policies and
rules
are, and how to enforce the
rules
to
prevent
student
from
bullying
others.
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IELTS essay DESPITE A LOT OF EFFORT, MANY STUDENTS STILL FACE BULLYING AT SCHOOL AND ONLINE. WHAT CAN SOCIETY DO TO HELP?

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