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Description my new job to a friend

Description my new job to a friend 53ykD

I have got a new job. It's in a supermarket and I work there every Saturday. I start at 8 am and the shop opens at 9 am. I fill the shelves with food products and tidy the shopping basket by entrance. I clean the floors and work at checkout. My manager is very nice. She tells me what to do and never shouts. The other workers are really friendly, too. We take three breaks a day and finish at 4 pm. It's really hard work because the shops gets very busy, but I enjoy it.

I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 a new job. It's in a supermarket and I work there every Saturday. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiate
start
 at 8 am and the shop opens at 9 am. I fill the shelves with food products and tidy the shopping basket by entrance. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
 clean the floors and work at checkout. My manager is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nice. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :informs
tells
 me what to do and never shouts. The other workers are really
 friendly, too. We take three breaks a day and finish at 4 pm. It's really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :arduous
hard
 work This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 the shops This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 busy, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I enjoy it. 