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Executive summary of 4Future

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4Future is an online learning community that is planning to serve with hundreds of classes on topics such as languages, business, marketing, finance, office programs, and more for students and people who enjoy learning new skills. At 4Future, the goal is to bring together thousands of students for them to gain new skills and knowledge that will help them advance in their careers and studies. 4Future was founded in Baku, Azerbaijan. The company is owned by partners Aida Ahmadova and Rasim Seyfullayev. Both are Khazar University students. Rasim has worked and studied in accounting and finance, whereas Aida has experience and knowledge in marketing. While there are currently several local businesses in Azerbaijan offering online education, only two of these offer a wide range of online courses (“Safavy”, “Savadly”). The main objective of this project is to give access to the students (first of all the students in Azerbaijan, then the students around the globe) to be able to learn anything and anywhere they want. 4Future's marketing strategy is to overcome limits in education, to emphasize that quality education can be obtained and new skills can be developed with an online course.
4Future is an
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online
learning community
that is
planning to serve with hundreds of classes on topics such as languages, business, marketing, finance, office programs, and more for
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students
and
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people
who enjoy learning new
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skills
. At 4Future, the goal is to bring together thousands of
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students
for them to gain new
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skills
and knowledge that will
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help
them advance in their careers and studies.

4Future
was founded
in Baku, Azerbaijan. The
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company
is
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owned
by partners Aida
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Ahmadova
and
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Rasim
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Seyfullayev
. Both are Khazar University
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students
.
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Rasim
has worked and studied in accounting and finance, whereas Aida has experience and knowledge in marketing.

While there are
currently
several local businesses in Azerbaijan offering
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online
education,
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only
two of these offer a wide range of
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online
courses (“
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Safavy
”, “
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Savadly
”).

The main objective of this project is to give access to the
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students
(
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first of all
the
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students
in Azerbaijan, then the
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students
around the globe) to be able to learn anything and anywhere they want.

4Future's marketing strategy is to overcome limits in education, to emphasize that quality education can
be obtained
and new
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skills
can
be developed
with an
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online
course.
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IELTS essay Executive summary of 4Future

Essay
  American English
5 paragraphs
192 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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