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Description about my favourite classmate

Description about my favourite classmate 7rJwk
There are about thirty-eight students in my class. We spend a lot of time together doing our projects, homework and going on school excursions. It is no wonder that some of my best friends are my classmates. I would generally describe my class as a mirthful bunch. Of course, there are several quiet classmates like Wenli and Horace, who prefer to keep to themselves than join in our boisterous behaviour when the teacher is not in class. I sometimes wonder how they are able to block out the noise because we can be most annoying during those times. The thing I admire most about my class is our ability to work harmoniously together. Co-operation is one of our strongest points as a class. For example, we are supportive of our own classmates who take part in the annual sports meet and swimming carnival. Our classmates who participate, in turn, would get fired up by our constant cheering and encouragement and do better in their events. As a result, our class is always in the top three positions for best athletes.
There are about thirty-eight students in my
class
. We spend
a lot of
time together doing our projects, homework and going on school excursions. It is no wonder that
some
of my best friends are my classmates.

I would
generally
describe
my
class
as a mirthful bunch.
Of course
, there are several quiet classmates like
Wenli
and Horace, who prefer to
keep
to themselves than
join
in our boisterous
behaviour
when the teacher is not in
class
. I
sometimes
wonder how they are able to block out the noise
because
we can be most annoying during those times.

The thing I admire most about my
class
is our ability to work
harmoniously
together. Co-operation is one of our strongest points as a
class
.
For example
, we are supportive of our
own
classmates who
take part
in the annual sports
meet
and swimming carnival. Our classmates who participate, in turn, would
get
fired up by our constant cheering and encouragement and do better in their
events
.
As a result
, our
class
is always in the top three positions for best athletes.
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IELTS essay Description about my favourite classmate

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
180 words
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