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Describle the holiday you particularly enjoyed

Describle the holiday you particularly enjoyed 2PVQw

I had a great holiday when I was in night grade. My secondary school organized a trip for seniors. We went to Dak Lak for two days by coach. We had a good time on the coach, we played and sang together. It took about 3 hours to go there. This place has many famous and beautiful landscapes. Also, the food there was so unique and delicious. The thing I most enjoyed was the food – really – it was great and so cheap. Luckily, the weather was great too. I ejoyed the holiday so much because I and my friend did a lot of things together. The trip to Dak Lak really was the holiday of a lifetime. We had a lot of fun and got to see a lot of spectacular scenery. That was the most interesting trip I took recently. I’m looking forward to a similar vacation this year.

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