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Describle a part time job

Describle a part time job XV3gN

last year, after I finished high school and had a long summer vacation. so, I decided to get a part time job. And I applied to a bubble tea shop near my house. I worked the evening shift from 6pm to 10pm. That job requires quite pleasant as being honest, active. At first, I was not used to it because I was quite shy and did not get to know all the staff in the shop. But after a while, I got used to the job and also got to know you. Moreover, the hostess is also very friendly and funny. During this period, I did well and I got a precious chance to learn sales and stock. I have to admit that thanks to the experience of this job, I obtained a lot of valuable knowledge which I could not learn from university. Of course, I made so many friends who gave me so much professional help and courage. Although the salary of this job was not very high, the skills I learned were priceless. With the help of this working experience, I gain a precious offer from other famous companies when I graduated.

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