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Describe a time when you learnt something new

Describe a time when you learnt something new 11PlN

I am going to tell about a time when I learnt dress maker. Those days i was 18years old when i interested all things so i learnt dress maker among two months I could different clothes for sister in law and myself. I have always been chewing event at night. I bought new sewing machine. It was very exciting. That is way this hobby turn out my job. I chewed others then i found a lot of money from dress maker. It was great fun. I was so proud of my hobby but nowadays I can't chewing dress because i work as a teacher at sschool.

I am going to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :inform
tell
 about a time when I Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 maker. Those days Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 was 18years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 when Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 interested all things This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
Possible spelling mistake. 'learnt' is British English.learned
learnt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 maker among two months I could This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 clothes for This word is normally spelled with hyphen.sister-in-law
sister in law
 and Did you mean "myself"?myself
myself
. I have always been chewing This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :occasionhappening
event
 at night. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchased
bought
 new sewing machine. It was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 exciting. That is
 way this hobby turn out my job. I chewed others then Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 found This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 money from You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
 maker. It was great fun. I was This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 proud of my hobby This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 nowadays I can't The verb 'can't' requires base form of this verb: "chew"chew
chewing
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withgownfrockattiregarbuniformapparel
dress
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.I
i
 work as a teacher at Possible spelling mistake found.schools school
sschool
. 