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Describe a time when you learnt something new

Describe a time when you learnt something new 11PlN
I am going to tell about a time when I learnt dress maker. Those days i was 18years old when i interested all things so i learnt dress maker among two months I could different clothes for sister in law and myself. I have always been chewing event at night. I bought new sewing machine. It was very exciting. That is way this hobby turn out my job. I chewed others then i found a lot of money from dress maker. It was great fun. I was so proud of my hobby but nowadays I can't chewing dress because i work as a teacher at sschool.
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was 18years
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when
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interested all things
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i
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learnt
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dress
maker among two months I could
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different
clothes for
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sister in law
and
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myself
. I have always been chewing
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event
at night. I
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bought
new sewing machine. It was
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very
exciting.
That is
way this hobby turn out my job. I chewed others then
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i
found
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a lot of
money from
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dress
maker. It was great fun. I was
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so
proud of my hobby
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but
nowadays I can't
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chewing
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dress
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because
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work as a teacher at
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IELTS essay Describe a time when you learnt something new

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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