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describes how ketchup is produced

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The process describes how ketchup is produced from tomatoes. In general, there are many steps in the given process, which begins by growing tomato trees and finishes by serving with the meal. Looking at the picture in more detail, in the first step, the workers pick tomatoes and put them in the basket. In the next step, they remove bad tomatoes and send good tomatoes to the factory by trucks or lorries. After that stalk, seeds and skin are removed from the tomatoes. In the following step, people put the tomatoes into the container and crush them in the same place. Following that people add some sugar, vinegar and salt into the mixture and boil. After leaving for two hours, ketchup is poured into a bottle and sealed/labeled. Before selling to many supermarkets to serve with the meal, ketchup is checked by the quality control division and put on packages.

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 by growing tomato trees and finishes by serving with the meal.

Looking at the picture in more detail, in the first
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step
, the workers pick tomatoes and put them in the basket. In the next
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step
, they remove This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
 tomatoes and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
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good
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some
 sugar, vinegar and salt into the mixture and boil.

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 into a bottle and sealed/labeled. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
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 supermarkets to serve with the meal, ketchup is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitored
checked
 by the quality control division and put on packages. 