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Travel in space is good. Why, because it's good to know about space and everything there, like sun and stars and etc. . . Because they can see anythings outside the earth but people will do some activities for space for know something. Some people thinks that space exploration is a enjoyable things to do. a danger can happen when you use a think in right time an right place. If people continue to travel into space, I think there will have som things come to anywhere people liv. The: rewards may affect if you do not take it in time or life can happen a problem. When you come back in the earth. They were get many Rawards they are welcome by many rewards.
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and everything there, like sun and stars
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activities for
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for know something.
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exploration is
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in right time
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IELTS essay test is test if i am hrer

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
125 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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