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Describe your singer in your life

Describe your singer in your life 5B29D
My favourite singer name is Nancy Amor. She is from Arabic singer. Her songs are illustrious in numerous countries. I remmember when I heard "habibi or Majnun" so_called "Majnun". I couldn't get out of my head during a week. I love listening to her and I do it almost everyday. Beacuse her songs give me energy and get me going every morning. Especially when I can't get out of bed. Also her songs rapid beat makes me keen on to get up and jump around. What's important is that they assist me pace myself during run. I also sing along to her songs when I am cooking dancing cleaning my rooms and yard. And there is one intreguing thing which is somewhat hard to explain. Her songs make me feel more powerful. Actually it doesn't matter how it works as long as it has positive impact on me. I don't know about her lifestlye and personally but I know that she is attractive pretty and outspoken woman. It seems to me that the word that best describes her is optimistic. She always smiles and I don't think it is a fake smile. At least her smile doesn't look like a fake one. I love her
My
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favourite
singer name is Nancy
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Amor
. She is from Arabic singer. Her songs are illustrious in numerous countries. I
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remmember
when I heard
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habibi
or
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Majnun
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"
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so_called
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Majnun
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"
. I couldn't
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get
out of my head during a week.
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I
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love
listening to her and I do it almost
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everyday
.
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Beacuse
her songs give me energy and
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get
me going every morning.
Especially
when I can't
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get
out of bed.
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Also
her songs rapid beat
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makes
me keen on to
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get
up and jump around. What's
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important
is that they assist me pace myself during run. I
also
sing along to her songs when I am cooking dancing cleaning my rooms and yard. And there is one
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intreguing
thing which is somewhat
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hard
to
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explain
. Her songs
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make
me feel more powerful. Actually it doesn't matter how it works as long as it has
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positive
impact on me.

I don't know about her
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lifestlye
and
personally
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but
I know that she is attractive pretty and outspoken woman. It seems to me that the word that best
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describes
her is optimistic. She always smiles and I don't
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think
it is a fake smile. At least her smile doesn't look like a fake one. I
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love
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her
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IELTS essay Describe your singer in your life

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
204 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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