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In modern world, Fast food become a one part of life.this bad effects harmful their diet and lifestyle. What do you agree it

In modern world, Fast food become a one part of life. this bad effects harmful their diet and lifestyle. What do you agree it 5a2XB
Nowadays, Fast food invading our dietery patern without invitation because most people have busy lifestyle to fulfill their basic needs. Fast foods have adverse effects in our health and lives. Its have grate taste and addictive value. I partially agree this statement and I will discuss because of reasons this essay. Day by day, most people suffer from disease related diet as gastritis and non cominicable disease.
Nowadays,
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food invading our
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dietery
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patern
without invitation
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people
have busy lifestyle to fulfill their basic needs.
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foods have adverse effects in our health and
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. Its have grate taste and addictive value. I
partially
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agree
this statement and I will discuss
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because
of reasons this essay. Day by day, most
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people
suffer from disease related diet as gastritis and non
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disease.
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IELTS essay In modern world, Fast food become a one part of life. this bad effects harmful their diet and lifestyle. What do you agree it

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