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Describe your personal background

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Over the past years, I have been wondering what is the purpose and depths of my life. What can I do as a citizen to contribute to the country's growth? It's a question I ask myself frequently in the hopes of finding an answer. Growing up, I was neither the smartest nor the most troubled student in the class, but I was always a very easy-going person that likes to help other people, as well as contribute to something that I think needs to be changed. I have also always been obsessed with the business world because ever since I was a kid I always helped my father with the family business by selling bags, accessories, and wallets. I gained plenty of experience and knowledge from it that I’m sure would help me with my studies in the future.
Over the past years, I have been wondering what is the purpose and depths of my life. What can I do as a citizen to contribute to the country's growth? It's a question I ask myself
frequently
in the hopes of finding an answer. Growing up, I was neither the smartest nor the most troubled student in the
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class
,
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I was always a
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very
easy-going person that likes to
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help
other
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people
,
as well
as contribute to something that I
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think
needs to be
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changed
. I have
also
always
been obsessed
with the business world
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because
ever since I was a kid I always
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helped
my father with the family business by selling bags, accessories, and wallets. I gained
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plenty
of experience and knowledge from it that I’m sure would
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help
me with my studies in the future.

IELTS essay Describe your personal background

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
139 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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