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Describe your ideal place you study.

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I am going to talk about idealto study. Now I work to work as a teacher at school. But nowadays there are many facilities to study in our country. There are some liceyms, colleges, institutes, universities. When I have free time I dream more things for instance studying. Nowadays every region has Prezident’s school. I saw this kind of school on TV. There are many comfortable facilities in it. The school constructed on modern disayn. Each pupil has own computer to. There is swimming pool also. When I were young, I would study in President’s school. , which is my ideal place to study.
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school
on TV. There are
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constructed on modern
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computer to. There is swimming pool
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IELTS essay Describe your ideal place you study.

Essay
  American English
2 paragraphs
104 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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