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some people say that as you can watch any film online nobody will go to the cinema in the future

some people say that as you can watch any film online nobody will go to the cinema in the future GwdWo

I disagree with the idea that as you can watch any film online nobody will go to the cinema in the future. I have some several arguments to support my opinion. Forst of all, always when people invents something new, they have fears that old will disappear. For example: when photography was invented they thought that painting would disappear, when e-books were invented they thought that paper books would disappear. But non of them happened, and they developed peacefully. Moreover, we live in the era of globalization. It's much cheaper to watch movie online instead of going to the cinema. There are people who prefer prefer watching movies online and there are people who prefer watching movies at the cinema. These are the reasons why i disagree that as you can watch any film online nobody will go to the cinema in the future.

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