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some people believe that the radio is the best way to get news, while others believe that TV is better for purpose. discuss both views, and give your opinion.

Technology play significant role in our lifestyle. However it is always argued that the redio is the best method to get news. Other people think get it was exceptional for this aim. I firmly believe that tv is best for get news. In this essay, I will discuss about both views in given below paragraphs with example. To begin with, Mostly radio is a cheap as compared to TV. Also all radio is a verious size like as pocket radio, which you can get to news in anywhere. Moreover with the help of radio you can many program listen, like music, sports commentary as well as stories. Furthermore redio is easily operate and easy to carry. For instance you are working in place, so you can easily get news and information by radio. Many truck drivers use radio in during drives. Hanse radio is the best way to get news. On the other hand, television is the best for get news. Nowadays many people use TV as compared to radio. With the help of television many people watch news. Not only watch news but also watch many programs like sport, entertainment, music. Mostly news channel is a repeat news, which is a good advantage. Now, with the help of internet a lot of online apps and channels on TV such as hotstar, Netflix and many more. In addition visual affect and animated pictures for this reason people like watch news on television. To conclusion, although radio is easily operate, easily carry, anywhere area you can get news and information by radio, according to me, people can watch news in many programs on television as well as best visual affect and animated pictures people like news on TV.
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it was exceptional for this aim. I
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. In this essay, I will
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radio
is a
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all
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radio
is a
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size like as pocket
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in anywhere.
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many
program listen, like music, sports commentary
as well
as stories.
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Furthermore
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is
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operate and easy to carry. For
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news
and information by
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.
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Many
truck drivers
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use
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radio
in during drives.
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Hanse
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radio
is the
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best
way to
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get
news.

On the other hand
, television is the
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for
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news
. Nowadays
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of television
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also
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programs like sport, entertainment, music.
Mostly
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channel is a repeat
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, Netflix and
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more. In
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addition
visual affect and animated pictures
for this reason
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people
like
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watch
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news
on television.

To conclusion, although
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operate,
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carry, anywhere area you can
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news
and information by
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, according to me,
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IELTS essay some people believe that the radio is the best way to get news, while others believe that TV is better for purpose.

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
287 words
5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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