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Describe your closed friend

Describe your closed friend kexQK

Human cannot live alone and that is a reason why we need to have friends in our life. I'm also like that. I have many friends as well, but not everyone is considered the best friend. I suppose that the best friend should have some specific qualities and responsibilities. And A person whom I want to tell you, is my close friend. Her name is Huyen, she lived next my door and we have known each other for more than twelve years. She is kind-hearted. She's always willing to help me whenever I need. She has shoulder-length hair with a slim body, especially, her eyes are gray. It looks very special different from people I know. Also like other normal relationships. We have had many troubles but everything was okay after a few moments because we understand each other very well and that is the reason the troubles do not last longer. The last twelve years, we did a lot of things together, about studying or hanging out with each other, also we are considered as a member of each family. Have to say, as brothers. Now we're living far away from each other. Because I chose to continue college education and she did not. I also hope that the Covid 19 pandemic ends soon, so I can comeback to my hometown to visit her.

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 for more than twelve years.

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kind-hearted. She's always willing to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
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different
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because
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 the reason the troubles do not last longer.

The last twelve years, we did This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
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, also
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 as a member of each family. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
Have to
 say, as brothers.

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Now
 we're living far away from each You use this word too often, consider replacing it withnewalternativemore
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. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
Because
 I chose to continue college Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).education, and
education and
 she did not.

I also
 hope that the Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?COVID-19Covid-19
Covid 19
 pandemic ends This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I can comeback to my hometown to visit her. 