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Describe whether Cinema is good or bad

Describe whether Cinema is good or bad DqMem
Firstly, films are source of information and knowledge in their own aspect. Cinema is meant for entertainment through conceptual fiction of story and scene which can be either positive or negative. Movie with positive message can be considered to be a reference point in real life. Just like, I recently watche a movie called "3 Idiots" which left me inspired and motivated for approach towards life. The movie rightly connected with aspect that we should gain knowledge in our area of interest rather just do for sake of fulfilling our parents expectations and pressure. Movies can also have negative impact in a human being personality through the violence, disturbing visuals, antagonist attitude and rape sequence portrayed during the film. To avoid developing any negative attitude one should remember the end consequence of wrong actions. Cinema overall is a medium where everyone can relate and inherit some good habit in themselves.
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, films are source of information and knowledge in their
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aspect. Cinema
is meant
for entertainment through conceptual fiction of story and scene which can be either
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positive
or
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negative
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like, I recently
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3 Idiots
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left
me inspired and motivated for approach towards life. The
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movie
rightly
connected with aspect that we should gain knowledge in our area of interest
rather
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just
do for sake of fulfilling our parents expectations and pressure.
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Movies
can
also
have
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negative
impact in a human being personality through the violence, disturbing visuals, antagonist attitude and rape sequence portrayed during the film. To avoid developing any
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negative
attitude one should remember the
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end
consequence of
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wrong
actions.

Cinema
overall
is a medium where everyone can relate and inherit
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some
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good
habit in themselves.

IELTS essay Describe whether Cinema is good or bad

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2 paragraphs
150 words
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