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Describe ways to reduce pollution

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In this essay I’m going to discuss about pollution and suggest some possible solution. First of all pollution is a serious problem around the world and one of the main reason is cars and big companies that produce hazard and pollution in the air. As the number of cars has increased the situation become worse. solving this problem is not simple and we can’t solve it just by rising petrol price. In my point of view one potential solution to this problem is encourage people to use more public transportation instead of private cars. Secondly administration should improve quality of petrol and collect old cars. It will be really effective if people start using electronic car. Moreover we should take care of green environment which is a source of oxygen, food and medicine. However government should improve public transportation with good facilities so people will use more if it will be more convenient and have a reasonable price. Also improving petrol quality can reduce spreeding harmful and dangerous gases in the air. Furthermore the quality of air can be improved by planting more and more trees du tu they clean and filter atmosphere. At the end we should use bio-gas and other echo-friendly fuels. In order to reduce the amount of harmful toxic gases. In conclusion air pollution has many bad effects on the health of people specially children and elderlys. So as I mentioned above we should use more public transportation. Although these s as re potential solution to the problem but non of them are perfect. Government should find best solution.
In this essay I’m going to discuss about
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and suggest
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First of all
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pollution
is a serious
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problem
around the world and one of the main reason is
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cars
and
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big
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companies
that produce hazard and
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pollution
in the
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air
.
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As
the number of
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cars
has increased the situation become worse.
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solving
this
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is not
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simple and
we can’t solve it
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by rising petrol price. In my point of view one potential
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solution
to this
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problem
is encourage
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people
to
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use
more public transportation
instead
of private
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cars
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administration should
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improve
quality of petrol and collect
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old
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cars
. It will be
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start
using electronic
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we should take care of green environment which is a source of oxygen, food and medicine.
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should
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improve
public transportation with
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good
facilities
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people
will
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use
more if it will be more convenient and have a reasonable price.
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reduce
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harmful and
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dangerous
gases in the
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air
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the quality of
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air
can be
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improved
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du
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clean and filter atmosphere. At the
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we should
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bio-gas and other echo-friendly fuels. In order to
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the amount of harmful toxic gases.
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I mentioned above we should
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more public transportation. Although these s as re potential
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to the
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non of them are perfect.
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Government
should
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find best
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IELTS essay Describe ways to reduce pollution

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  American English
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