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Write to your friend about new flat move and tell why have you moved and what''s new flat look like

Write to your friend about new flat move and tell why have you moved and what''s new flat look like 9aMep
How are you? Hope you are doing good. I am fine here. As you know that i was staying in the college hostel from past 2 years. Recently i moved to a new flat and i am writing this letter to tell you about the new place i moved. Earlier i was living in a hostel which was approximately 2 kilometer away from my university. I was facing difficulty in travelling and it was costing me too much, so i decided to move in a flat with my friend which is near to my education centre. I want to tell you that we have 2 rooms, a big kitchen which is equipped with all the needed appliances. It is a spacious apartment with a beautiful lawn in front. Best thing is that we have our personal car parking space. Now whenever you visit delhi, i want you to stay with me at my place and we can spend some quality time together. Hope to see you soon. My Regards to family. Yours lovingly Mahi
How are you? Hope you are doing
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good
.

I am fine here.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know that
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i
was staying in the college hostel from past 2 years. Recently
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i
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moved
to a new flat and
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i
am writing this letter to
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tell
you about the new place
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i
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moved
.

Earlier
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i
was living in a hostel which was approximately 2
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kilometer
away from my university. I was facing difficulty in travelling and it was costing me too much,
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so
Is this the personal pronoun "I"? It is spelled uppercase.
i
decided to
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move
in a flat with my friend which is near to my education
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centre
.

I want to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tell
you that we have 2 rooms, a
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big
kitchen which
is equipped
with all the needed appliances. It is a spacious apartment with a
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
beautiful
lawn in front.
A determiner is probably missing here: "the Best".
Best
thing is that we have our personal car parking space.

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Now
whenever you visit
Possible spelling mistake found.
delhi
,
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i
want you to stay with me at my
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
place and
we can spend
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some
quality time together. Hope to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
see
you
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soon
. My Regards to family.

Yours
lovingly


Possible spelling mistake found.
Mahi
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IELTS essay Write to your friend about new flat move and tell why have you moved and what''s new flat look like

Essay
  American English
7 paragraphs
173 words
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