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Describe the ways animals are protected in your country.

Describe the ways animals are protected in your country. k5VL2
Currently, my country has many animals being protected. This is the types of animal invaluable such as rhinos, elephant birds, black-capped vireo, brown kiki, v. v. v. The life of their being dangered by the people want to sell it to make large amount of money. This is the dangerous! The animals of natural contribute to the environment. Consequently, we must protect us to people and animals live together in harmony. The government has invested money in Wildlife Sanctuary. They gave civilazation warrant for arrest animals illegal. In addition to, they also encourage build many Zoo to people can see these animals and voluntary protect us.
Currently
, my country has
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many
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animals
being protected
. This is the types of
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animal
invaluable such as rhinos, elephant birds, black-capped vireo, brown
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kiki
, v. v. v. The life of their being
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dangered
by the
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people
want to sell it to
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make
large amount of money. This is the
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dangerous
! The
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animals
of natural contribute to the environment.
Consequently
, we
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must
protect us to
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people
and
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animals
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live
together in harmony. The
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government
has invested money in Wildlife Sanctuary. They gave
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civilazation
warrant for arrest
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animals
illegal.
In addition
to, they
also
encourage build
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many Zoo
to
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people
can
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see
these
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animals
and voluntary protect us.
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IELTS essay Describe the ways animals are protected in your country.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
106 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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