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Describe the transformation of Grange Park

Describe the transformation of Grange Park Ll0JG

The pictures illustrate how a public par, k which is called Grange park, Had been changed today compared to it in 1920. In general, the park 30 facilities have been altered it significantly for almost all parts located in the park. In 1920, visitors can enter the park from both two sides: The northern entrance on Avenue and south and one on Street but now the park opens a new one from underground for pp who use car. A fountain was located right at the heart of the park and a large stage for musicians on the left. However at the present the former was replaced by the Rosegarden and surrounded by four seats while later worse destructed it to make room for an amphitheater for concerts. Moreover, it was there was three gardens of rose, in spite of that the one on the north still exists. The north eastern corner used to be space a pond for water plants whilst the southeastern one was a glasshouse. Today picture shows that they are superseded by a cafe, a children’s play area and a water feature respectively.

The pictures illustrate how a public par, k which is called
 Grange You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
, Had been This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteredadjusted
changed
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
 compared to it in 1920.

In general
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 30 facilities have been altered
 it significantly
 for almost all parts located in the park.

In 1920, visitors can enter the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 from both two sides: The northern entrance on Avenue and south and one on Street This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 opens a new one from underground for pp who This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 car.

A fountain was located
 right at the heart of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
park
 and a large stage for musicians on the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departed
left
. Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?However,
However
 at the present the former was replaced
 by the Possible spelling mistake found.Rose garden
Rosegarden
 and surrounded by four seats while later worse destructed it to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 room for an amphitheater for concerts. Moreover
, it was Did you mean "there were three gardens"?there were three gardens
there was three gardens
 of rose, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:notwithstanding
in spite of
 that the one on the north still
 exists. The This expression is normally spelled as one or with hyphen.north-easternnortheastern
north eastern
 corner This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be space a pond for water plants whilst the southeastern one was a glasshouse. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
Today
 picture This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstratesportraysindicatesdisplays
shows
 that they are superseded
 by a 'cafe' is an imported foreign expression, which originally has a diacritic. Consider using "café"café
cafe
, a children’s play area and a water feature respectively
. 