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Describe the strangest news story you recently heard. Why do you think this story made the news? What do you think people can learn from the story?

Describe the strangest news story you recently heard. Why do you think this story made the news? What do you think people can learn from the story? kLdqW
I have come across many strange story since pandemic Covid-21. Covid news no longer bother people nowadays but in starting this news was quite shocking to the citizens all over country. Although this is not the first rare disease spreading over. However, the most strange news was the death of the most promising actor 'Sushant Singh Rajput' This information was not only surprising for his fans, but everyone in my country. This story became highly popular that even CBI officers were involved. This became number one trend on our social media platform. However, from my point of view there is not much people can learn about it. On the contrary, they can have awareness what is happening around the world.
I have
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strange story since pandemic Covid-21.
Did you mean "COVID-19" or the alternative spelling "Covid-19" (= coronavirus)?
Covid
news no longer bother
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people
nowadays
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but
in starting this news was quite shocking to the citizens all over country.
“Although” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Although
this is not the
first
rare disease spreading over.
However
,
This adjective uses the short comparatives form.
the most strange
news was the death of the most promising actor '
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Sushant
Singh
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Rajput
' This information was not
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only
surprising for his fans,
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but
everyone in my country. This story became
highly
popular that even CBI officers
were involved
. This became number one trend on our social media platform.
However
, from my point of view there is not much
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
can learn about it.
On the contrary
, they can have awareness what is happening around the world.

IELTS essay Describe the strangest news story you recently heard. Why do you think this story made the news? What do you think people can learn from the story?

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120 words
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