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Describe the problems of community centre and give ideas to repair them ?

Describe the problems of community centre and give ideas to repair them? R5nDk

Working in a community centre as a volunteer, I would like to discuss the problems. According to sources, community centre built in 17th century and all equipment are antiquated, due of this it's need to give some modern look. As, I told you before the situation of centre has various problems for example carpets become rusty, toilets lights are broken, front door not wide enough for disable people ' entry and extremely need new sports things. Due to the fact, our community centre's popularity decreasing day-by-day. In our society, you are the only business group which are helping people to rebuild them. Thus, you should have helped us and our local community because we have merely one centre where all age of people get together and enjoy numerous of activities. you can help us financially and in other words can sponsor some to pay money to paint the walls, provide some new carpets as a gift. Business group will be beneficial, if you are agreed to help us. For instance, firms would be mentioned in local newspaper due of this it will create good deed. The other thing, sponsor's name would be write on the door. This is the time for you to give back you are society. To conclude, financially you are the only person who can help us to rebuild our community centre. If you come forward to solve problems, you are business will be famous and costumers would be known you as a helper.

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community
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centre
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community
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centre
 built in 17th century and all equipment are antiquated
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some
 modern look.

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before
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enough
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entry and extremely
 need new sports things. Due to the fact, our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodcenterdistrictpeoplecompanynation
community
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centre
's popularity decreasing day-by-day.

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only
 business group which are helping This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to rebuild them. Thus
, you should have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 us and our local You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodcenterdistrictpeoplecompanynation
community
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because
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centre
 where all age of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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get
 together and enjoy numerous of activities. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterYou
you
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help
 us financially
 and in other words
 can sponsor This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 to pay money to paint the walls, provide This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 new carpets as a gift.

Business group will be beneficial, if you are This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquiesced
agreed
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us. For instance
, firms would be mentioned
 in local newspaper due of this it will create This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 deed. The other thing, sponsor's name would be Consider using the past participle "written"?written
write
 on the door. This is the time for you to give back you are society.

To conclude
, financially
 you are the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 person who can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us to rebuild our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withneighborhoodcenterdistrictpeoplecompanynation
community
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centre
. If you This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 forward to solve problems, you are business will be This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:well-known
famous
 and costumers would be known
 you as a helper. 