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describe the place you want to come

describe the place you want to come 709OA

“Ukiyo” and “elysian ” are beautiful words which I use to describe the place that I’ve always wanted to set foot on – Da Lat. “Ukiyo” and “elysian” which stand for detached the bothers of life in the floating world and a peaceful, divinely inspired place. Da Lat is the city of Lam Dong province in Vietnam. Surprisingly, I’m a homebody but when it comes to Da Lat, I have wanderlust for it. People said that Da Lat has fresh air, cool climate and gorgous French architecture. It’s blessed just to have the chance to come to Da Lat and enjoy watching 4 seasons in a short time. Besides, Da Lat is also the place where my rapper idol lives and makes music. His name is DSK ( Da Sun Kid ) and he works at Kong, a coffee house. It was his music which save me from stressed and depression.

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