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I'm easily attracted by unique paintings, especially paintings of natural scenes and peaceful villages. Look at the picture. We can see the rice field, buffalo carrying straw, banyan tree, and communal huts. It is a place where people live peacefully with nature. Here, We can feel we are surrounded by nature. In addition, We can feel the smells of nature around us. The rice field smells like earth after rain, banyan tree smells like shade on a hot day. I also hear some sounds that are coming from the birds, insects, or other animals that are living in this village. And, we can see the rice season is ripe now and all the people in my village are working hard to make sure that the rice is ready for harvest at the best time. They do not have easy lives but they work hard and enjoy what they have. This picture reminds me of sweet memories in my village. I remember the memories, in the hot days we used to hide in the banyan tree, and sometimes we used to bathe in the river, . I feel very lucky to be living in a small village as everyone knows each other and we work together for a better life. I really like this picture of the village, it's probably the slmost amazing picture I've ever seen.
I'm
easily
attracted by unique paintings,
especially
paintings of natural scenes and peaceful
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villages
. Look at the
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picture
. We can
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see
the
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rice
field, buffalo carrying straw, banyan tree, and communal huts. It is a place where
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people
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live
peacefully
with nature. Here, We can feel we
are surrounded
by nature.
In addition
, We can feel the smells of nature around us. The
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rice
field smells like earth after rain, banyan tree smells like shade on a hot day. I
also
hear
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some
sounds that are coming from the birds, insects, or other animals that are living in this
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village
. And, we can
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see
the
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rice
season is ripe
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now
and all the
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people
in my
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village
are working
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hard
to
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make
sure that the
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rice
is ready for harvest at the best time. They do not have easy
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lives
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but
they work
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hard
and enjoy what they have. This
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picture
reminds me of sweet memories in my
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village
. I remember the memories, in the hot days we
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used
to
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hide
in the banyan tree, and
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sometimes
we
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used
to bathe in the river
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, .
I feel
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very
lucky to be living in a
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small
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village
as everyone knows each
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other and
we work together for a better life.
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I
really
like this
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picture
of the
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village
, it's
probably
the
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slmost
amazing
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I've ever
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IELTS essay describe the picture below

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
226 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 5.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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