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Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses

Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses 5BGBV
How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have moved in last week. You will be surprised to know that the house totally looks like your grandparent’s old house from the outside. I’m renting a two bed room apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I love how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the house. However, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too old fashioned. The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which are opened all night what made me happy. Moreover, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate minded and they are usually strict about keeping the area clean and tidy. Why don’t you come by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook some authentic dish for you.
How are you? I can’t resist myself from writing you about the new place I have
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moved
in last week.

You will
be surprised
to know that the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
totally
looks like your grandparent’s
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old
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
from the outside. I’m renting a two
This word is normally spelled as one.
bed room
apartment in the 2nd floor with a large balcony and I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
how spacious all the rooms are. As the apartment is south-facing and no high raised buildings are nearby, sunlight and air are always creating a healthy atmosphere inside the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
house
.
However
, I am thinking of replacing few of the furniture’s as they are too
This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
old fashioned
.

The neighborhood is the center of all historic sites of the town and there are few restaurants which
are opened
all night what made me happy.
Moreover
, I have observed that most of the neighbors here are moderate
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
minded and
they are
usually
strict about keeping the area clean and tidy.

Why don’t you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
come
by to stay over the weekend? I can promise you that I’ll take you to a number of touristic spots and will cook
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
some
authentic dish for you.
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IELTS essay Describe the neighbourhood Invite your friend to come and see the house You do not need to write any addresses

Essay
  American English
4 paragraphs
186 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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