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Description of Julia's daily routine

Description of Julia's daily routine QVnw3
Julia Grant is 21 years old and work as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. She lives near the coast and she always gets up at 7: 00 am. She usually drinks her coffee by the window which opens to the beach and often goes online at this time. Her husband likes cooking and always helps her make lunch and dinner. He often prepared a delicious meal of roast beef at the weekend. Julia always washes up after lunch and dinner, they have not a dishwasher because there no free space to by one so she has to clean the dishes by herself. IN The afternoon she sometimes do the laundry at 4 pm then she goes to the beach and reads book and relaxes. At night they often go out and spend time with their friend by the beach. She also likes diving and sometimes do it.
Julia Grant is 21 years
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and work as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. She
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lives
near the
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coast and
she always
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gets
up at 7: 00 am. She
usually
drinks her coffee by the window which opens to the beach and
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often
goes online at this time. Her husband likes cooking and always
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helps
her
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make
lunch and dinner. He
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often
prepared a delicious meal of roast beef
The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.
at the weekend
. Julia always washes up after lunch and dinner, they have not a dishwasher
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because
there no free space to
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by
one
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so
she
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has to
clean the dishes by herself. IN The afternoon she
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sometimes
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do
the laundry at 4 pm then she goes to the beach and reads book and relaxes. At
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night they
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often
go out and spend time with their friend by the beach. She
also
likes diving and
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do it.

IELTS essay Description of Julia's daily routine

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
150 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 5.5
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