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Description of Julia's daily routine

Description of Julia's daily routine QVnw3

Julia Grant is 21 years old and work as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. She lives near the coast and she always gets up at 7: 00 am. She usually drinks her coffee by the window which opens to the beach and often goes online at this time. Her husband likes cooking and always helps her make lunch and dinner. He often prepared a delicious meal of roast beef at the weekend. Julia always washes up after lunch and dinner, they have not a dishwasher because there no free space to by one so she has to clean the dishes by herself. IN The afternoon she sometimes do the laundry at 4 pm then she goes to the beach and reads book and relaxes. At night they often go out and spend time with their friend by the beach. She also likes diving and sometimes do it.

Julia Grant is 21 years This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ancientagedmature
old
 and work as a volunteer on a science project in Fiji. She This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :resides
lives
 near the Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).coast, and
coast and
 she always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
gets
 up at 7: 00 am. She usually
 drinks her coffee by the window which opens to the beach and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 goes online at this time. Her husband likes cooking and always This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 her This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 lunch and dinner. He This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 prepared a delicious meal of roast beef The phrase 'at the weekend' is a British English expression, which is used the same way as "on the weekend" in American English.on the weekend
at the weekend
. Julia always washes up after lunch and dinner, they have not a dishwasher This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 there no free space to Did you maybe mean "buy" or "be"?buybe
by
 one This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 she This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:oughts to
has to
 clean the dishes by herself. IN The afternoon she This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
The pronoun 'she' is usually used with a third-person or a past tense verb: "does", "did".doesdid
do
 the laundry at 4 pm then she goes to the beach and reads book and relaxes. At The comma is probably missing here: "night, they".night, they
night they
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:frequently
often
 go out and spend time with their friend by the beach. She also
 likes diving and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 do it. 