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Describe the following picture.

Describe the following picture. eAj87
In the picture I saw two people cycling on the beach. These people are equipped with helmets and backpacks so I think they cycling for fitness. This is a great way to exercise and keep fit. You can ride your bike and breathe fresh air at sea. This not only helps you physically but also mentally. Through the photo, I can see that they are healthy people and have a habit of exercising. Which is the result of regular exercise.
In the picture I
saw
two
people
cycling on the beach. These
people
are equipped
with helmets and backpacks
so
I
think
they cycling
for fitness. This is a great way to exercise and
keep
fit. You can ride your bike and breathe fresh air at sea. This not
only
helps
you
physically
but
also
mentally. Through the photo, I can
see
that they are healthy
people
and have a habit of exercising.
Which
is the result of regular exercise.
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IELTS essay Describe the following picture.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
80 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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