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Describe the first/last time you did something important.

Describe the first/last time you did something important. KnXPN

Everyone has their own unforgettable memories in life. And me too, I also had fond memories for myself. But the memory that I miss the most is the memory of my first day at primary school. The night before I went to school, I went to bed early but I can not sleep because I very nervous. The visions of tomorrow at school flashed in my hind. I will meet new friends, new teacher. And that morning, I got up early, it’s not like when I have to go to kindergarten. I had a strange feeling of excitement

Everyone has their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 unforgettable You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthoughtremembrancerecollectionmindconsciousness
memories
 in life. And me too, I also
 had fond You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthoughtremembrancerecollectionmindconsciousness
memories
 for myself. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthoughtremembrancerecollectionmindconsciousness
memory
 that I miss the most is the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withthoughtremembrancerecollectionmindconsciousness
memory
 of my first
 day at primary school. The night This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:previouslyprior to
before
 I went to school, I went to bed early This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I can not sleep This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 nervous. The visions of tomorrow at school flashed in my hind. I will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 new friends, new teacher. And that morning, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 up early, it’s not like when I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
 go to kindergarten. I had a strange feeling of Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphexcitement.excitement!excitement?excitement:excitement,excitement;
excitement