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You're such an angel lending me your electric screwdriver. It really helped me fix my broken fan. However, while it helped me fix my appliance, I broke it after my very last screw, and I'm sorry about it. I didn't have a fan for a week making my nights sweaty and yucky. I got very excited the very moment I received your electric screwdriver, knowing that I can already get a more relaxing night sleep. The excitement continued until I fixed my fan making me jump up and down like a kangaroo. While doing so, I hit my hand causing me to accidentally drop your tool. I heard a loud bang and I saw your tiny helpful devices break down into smaller pieces. Not to worry, though, as I promise to buy you a new one. I don't think I can put it back together, but I hope the incident won't break our friendship, as if broken, no amount of screwdriver can fix it. Aside from a new shiny tool, I would like to invite you for a dinner and a move after as a token of my appreciation. Looking forward to spending time with you.

You're such an angel lending me your electric screwdriver. It really
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 my broken fan. However
, while it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assisted
helped
 me This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 my appliance, I broke it after my This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 last screw, and I'm sorry about it.

I didn't have a fan for a week making my nights sweaty and In some contexts, this is childish language. Consider alternatives.
yucky
. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 excited the This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 moment I received your electric screwdriver, knowing that I can already This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a more relaxing night sleep. The excitement continued until I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectified
fixed
 my fan making me jump up and down like a kangaroo. While doing This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
, I hit my hand causing me to accidentally
 drop your tool. I heard a loud bang and I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 your tiny helpful devices break down into smaller pieces.

Not to worry, though, as I promise to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 you a new one. I don't This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
think
 I can put it back together, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 I hope the incident won't break our friendship, as if broken, no amount of screwdriver can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :rectify
fix
 it. Aside from a new shiny tool, I would like to invite you for a dinner and a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :relocate
move
 after as a token of my appreciation. Looking forward to spending time with you. 