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describe something you own which has improved your life

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I’m going to talk about my smartphone which is one of the most important gadgets in my life. Last year, on the occasion of my 16th birthday, my mother gave me a very precious gift, which is an iPhone 6s. I have used it both in study and entertainment every day. My smartphone is considered as one of my modern educational tools. Only with the phone connected to the Internet, I can access and surf webs to broaden my knowledge. For example, when there are lessons that I don’t understand in class, I can use it to search for lectures and videos online, which is really helpful. Moreover, I can download a lot of games or books, music, movies and they are free. As a result, after tiring lessons, this will be a good way to relieve stress and get back my energy. For instance, when I do the housework with my mother, I regularly listen to my favorite songs. In addition, it helps me to keep in touch with my family and my friends. When I want to make contact with my classmates, I can text messages or make video calls and we can easily see each other’s faces. In short, my phone has offered me a range of great benefits in my daily life. If I didn’t have it, it would be difficult for me to contact my near and dear friends and family members.

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important
 gadgets in my life.

Last year, on the occasion of my 16th birthday, my mother gave me a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 precious gift, which is an iPhone 6s. I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 it both in study and entertainment every day.

My smartphone is considered
 as one of my modern educational tools. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
Only
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class
, I can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it to search for lectures and videos online, which is really
 helpful.

Moreover
, I can download This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
a lot of
 games or books, music, Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).movies, and
movies and
 they are free. As a result
, after tiring lessons, this will be a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 way to relieve This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accentuate
stress
 and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 back my energy. For instance
, when I do the housework with my mother, I regularly
 listen to my favorite songs. In addition
, it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assists
helps
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 in touch with my family and my friends. When I want to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
 contact with my classmates, I can text messages or This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :createconstructmanufactureproduce
make
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calls and
 we can easily
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 each other’s faces.

In short, my phone has offered me a range of great benefits in my daily life. If I didn’t have it, it would be difficult for me to contact my near and dear friends and family members. 