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Describe something you have bought recently

Describe something you have bought recently VrKQ3

Today. I'm going to talk about a new laptop that I have bought recently. I bought it last month. It's a very useful device with a beautifully sleek apple design. It has various functions and features powered by it's hundreds of thousands of apps. I can use it to play games, to listen to music, to read my favourite books, and of course to surf the internet. Also, it's a efficient assistant in my study like giving presentations, taking meeting notes, receiving and replying email, for example. Most importantly, it's very light and amazingly portable. I use it mostly everyday. I can't be more satisfied with my laptop. It makes my life and study much easier than I've ever imagined. It allows me to share my photos in a simple and easy way. It's like having my whole life just under my fingertips. I couldn't live without it

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bought
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