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Describe something you borrowed from someone which was very useful

Describe something you borrowed from someone which was very useful yPjV3
In every day life, a number of people borrow and lend thing to each others. A lot of people feel uncomfortable about borrowing and lending things. But, today I would like to talk about a dress which I was borrowed from my friend. Last 2years, my paternal uncle organized a function. He decided us, all family members wear black color dress. I was little bit confused, because those days my family suffered from financial problems. I didn't buy any dress. Then I called with my friend. She was very wise and excellent friend. I told to her my problem. She solved my issues. Next day, I went to her home to purchased suit. Further, she gave me matching jewelry and footwear. When, I wore those dress on party. Everyone gave me compliments. As for as, these colors suits on my personality. That time, I was over the moon. So, this was a think, I borrowed from my friend. It was very useful for me.
Did you mean "In everyday"?
In every day
life, a number of
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people
borrow and lend thing to each
The noun should be probably in the singular form: "other"?
others
.
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A lot of
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people
feel uncomfortable about borrowing and lending things.
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But
,
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today
I would like to talk about a
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dress
which I
was borrowed
from my
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friend
. Last 2years, my paternal uncle organized a function. He decided us, all family members wear black color
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dress
. I was
Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".
little bit
confused,
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because
those days my family suffered from financial problems. I didn't
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buy
any
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dress
. Then I called with my
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friend
. She was
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very
wise and excellent
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friend
. I
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told
The verb 'to tell someone' does not require a preposition.
to her
my problem. She solved my issues.
Next
day, I went to her home to
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purchased
suit.
Further
, she gave me matching jewelry and footwear.
“When” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
When
, I wore those
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dress
on party. Everyone gave me compliments. As for as, these colors suits on my personality. That time, I was over the moon.
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So
, this was a
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think
, I borrowed from my
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friend
. It was
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very
useful for me.
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IELTS essay Describe something you borrowed from someone which was very useful

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
164 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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