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Describe something important that has been kept in your family fro a long time. you should say, what is it, when your family had it, how your family got it, and explain why it is important for your family.

Describe something important that has been kept in your family fro a long time. you should say, what is it, when your family had it, how your family got it, and explain why it is important for your family. LrAAr
There are a number of things with my family that's mean a lot to them. These are ancient and valuable items. Today I got an opportunity to explain it, I would like to share about a huge wooden box for storage of clothes. It came from the dowry of my parental grandmotherThat is the main reason behind the importance. It's been more than 65 years since to bring that into our family. Firstly, It belongs to my grandmother, after her death, my mother uses to store valuable items. I and my family have various memories of that. We could not replace it with any expensive existence in the world. Every year, we polish it for maintenance to keep it for the years.
There are a number of things with my family that's mean a lot to them. These are ancient and valuable items.
Today
I
got
an opportunity to
explain
it, I would like to share about a huge wooden box for storage of clothes. It came from the dowry of my parental
grandmotherThat
is the main reason behind the importance. It's been more than 65 years since to bring that into our family.
Firstly
, It belongs to my grandmother, after her death, my mother
uses
to store valuable items. I and my family have various memories of that. We could not replace it with any expensive existence in the world. Every year, we polish it for maintenance to
keep
it for the years.
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IELTS essay Describe something important that has been kept in your family fro a long time. you should say, what is it, when your family had it, how your family got it, and explain why it is important for your family.

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
122 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.0
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