Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

Describe someone who inspired you

Describe someone who inspired you y790g
Lìfe story means things happened around someone, even their childhood. For me, my life story not really spectular, however there are many life story on the word can give us inspiration. Of course, each person will admire someone and take them as an example, and me too. The person who inspired me and help me promote myself is Colonel Harland Sanders. Lìfe story means things happened around someone, even their childhood. For me, my life story not really spectular, however there are many life story on the word can give us inspiration. Of course, each person will admire someone and take them as an example, and me too. The person who inspired me and help me promote myself is Colonel Harland Sanders
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lìfe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
means things happened around
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
someone
, even their childhood. For me, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
not
really
Possible spelling mistake found.
spectular
,
however
there are
Use "much" or "little" with uncountable nouns.
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "stories"?
story
on the word can give us inspiration.
Of course
, each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
will admire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
someone
and take them as an example, and me too. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
who inspired me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me promote myself is Colonel
Possible spelling mistake found.
Harland
Sanders.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Lìfe
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
means things happened around
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
someone
, even their childhood. For me, my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
story
not
really
Possible spelling mistake found.
spectular
,
however
there are
Use "much" or "little" with uncountable nouns.
many
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
life
Possible agreement error. Did you mean "stories"?
story
on the word can give us inspiration.
Of course
, each
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
will admire
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
someone
and take them as an example, and me too. The
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
person
who inspired me and
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
me promote myself is Colonel
Possible spelling mistake found.
Harland
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
Sanders
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS essay Describe someone who inspired you

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
121 words
This writing has been penalized,
text can't be
less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • Include an introduction and conclusion
  • Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts
  • 5band
    Ao dai is the traditional in viet nam
    Every country in the world has a traditional costume, and Vietnam people are proud to own the Ao Dai. The Ao Dai has two main parts: the pants and the tunic. The loose pants with a high waist, are held by an elastic belt sewn at the top. The tunic covers the whole body, except the head, hands, and f...
  • 6.5band
    what type of sport is more effective for everyone
    There is a difference in opinions as to what type of sport is more effective for everyone. Some people consider that there are many benefits of taking part in collective sports while others maintain that participating in individual sports are also a better option. I am more in favor of the former id...
  • 6.5band
    Global exchange programs is a controversial matter in recent years in the world.
    Global exchange programs is a controversial matter in recent years in the world. While some teachers argue that students can reap a great deal of benefits from foreign exchange projects, I am strongly convinced that these procedures are likely to involve more harmful impacts. On one hand, there is ...
  • 6band
    A Lack of Exercise for today's Generation
    A number of people see millennials as frequently entitled and narcissistic. Nowadays life has become slightly easier for this generation in comparison to the past. Be that as it may, it is true that the youth of today are always sedentary. In particular, the children are often criticised for lazing ...
  • 6.5band
    this and that is what and where if the story cannot end
    At present times, sports is being encouraged so that people can maintain their health and socialize with others. However, most of the people are perplexed in choosing team sports or individual sports. A number of individuals opine that team sports such as football are more advantageous, whereas othe...
  • 5band
    Describe a short trip that you often take but you do not like
    The short trip, which I frequently take is traveling to the Tennis club where I am enrolling. Moreover, the club is located in the north of Tehran which lies a bit far away from my residence. So, I need to travel by private car two days a week to reach the club and it takes around one hour to reach ...