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Ao dai is the traditional in viet nam

Ao dai is the traditional in viet nam AJANN
Every country in the world has a traditional costume, and Vietnam people are proud to own the Ao Dai. The Ao Dai has two main parts: the pants and the tunic. The loose pants with a high waist, are held by an elastic belt sewn at the top. The tunic covers the whole body, except the head, hands, and feet. It is made up of a Mao collar, two flaps that descend to above the ankles and long sleeves. The closure is done discreetly on the side by small buttons. The slit of the tunic generally rises a few two or three centimeters higher than the pants. Although the outfit is very discreet, it brings curves to the body. The most common color of Ao Dai for women is white. In other cases, it has many patterns and is made of different kinds of fabric, and all are flexible, light, and airy.
Every country in the world has a traditional costume, and Vietnam
people
are proud to
own
the
Ao
Dai
. The
Ao
Dai
has two main parts: the pants and the tunic. The loose pants with a high waist,
are held
by an elastic belt sewn at the top.
The
tunic covers the whole body, except the head, hands, and feet. It
is made
up of a Mao collar, two flaps that descend to above the ankles and long sleeves. The closure
is done
discreetly
on the side by
small
buttons. The slit of the tunic
generally
rises a few two or three centimeters higher than the pants. Although the outfit is
very
discreet, it brings curves to the body. The most common color of
Ao
Dai
for women is white. In other cases, it has
many
patterns and
is made
of
different
kinds of fabric, and all are flexible, light, and airy.
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IELTS essay Ao dai is the traditional in viet nam

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