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Describe one of your friends

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I have a friend whose named mahsa. I had know her since my freshman in university. We were living in same saloon in dorm. I had no idea about we became friends, one day I was listening to one of yanni's music's and suddenly we started sharing our interest in music! We both got same taste therefore that leads us to become friends. Mhasa is an independent, tactful and sensible person. she always talk and behave with manners however as friends we have got our crazy times together too. We have lots of incommon such as same taste in music whitch made a strong bond between us. in the other hand our upbringing and behaviour were so much lookalike.
I have a
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friend
whose named
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mahsa
. I had
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know
her since my freshman in university. We were living in same saloon in dorm. I had no
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idea
about we became
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friends
, one day I was listening to one of
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yanni
's music's and
suddenly
we
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started
sharing our interest in music! We both
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got
same taste
therefore
that leads us to become
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friends
.
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Mhasa
is an independent, tactful and sensible person.
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she
always
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talk
and behave with manners
however
as
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friends
we have
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got
our crazy times together too. We have lots of
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incommon
such as same taste in music
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whitch
made a strong bond between us. in the other hand our upbringing and
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were
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IELTS essay Describe one of your friends

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
119 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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