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Describe one of your friends

Describe one of your friends 0M6el

I have a friend whose named mahsa. I had know her since my freshman in university. We were living in same saloon in dorm. I had no idea about we became friends, one day I was listening to one of yanni's music's and suddenly we started sharing our interest in music! We both got same taste therefore that leads us to become friends. Mhasa is an independent, tactful and sensible person. she always talk and behave with manners however as friends we have got our crazy times together too. We have lots of incommon such as same taste in music whitch made a strong bond between us. in the other hand our upbringing and behaviour were so much lookalike.

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