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Describe one of my favorite trip to a city

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I would like to tell you about my journey to Da Nang city. I went with my family to Da Nang city last summer. We stayed there for a week. We visited Marble Mountains, Ba Na Hills, Son Tra Peninsula, Cham Museum, and especially new bridges, Dragon Bridge and Tran Thi Ly Bridge. They were so beautiful. We went to the beach and had seafood. We took a lot of pictures. I really enjoyed my trip to Da Nang. I wil come back next year.
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IELTS essay Describe one of my favorite trip to a city

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
85 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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