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The woman who lives across from mine, Her name is Mrs. Ubon Sawetsothon but everyone calls her Tik. She’s a workaholic chatterbox and easy-going person. She always shares some food, watches my house when I’m away and does the shopping for my family. I really love her but sometimes she usually makes some noise and lets her dog barks all day, It drives me crazy because I don’t like that loud noise. But most of all I think the most important quality of a good neighbor is friendliness and sure she had it. I’m lucky that she is my neighbor.
The woman who
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across from mine, Her name is Mrs.
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Ubon
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Sawetsothon
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Tik
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house
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her
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makes
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noise and
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her dog barks all day, It drives me crazy
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most of all I
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the most
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neighbor is friendliness and sure she had it. I’m lucky that she is my neighbor.

IELTS essay describe my neighbourhood

Essay
  American English
1 paragraphs
100 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
4.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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