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Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society.

Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society. q515a
Yes, in my opinion, any job is useful to society but being a teacher is the profession that I find the most useful. We don't have to be well- known for something, we have to be a useful person. A useful person is a person who knows how to improve social and human life, help the country perfect and reach out to the world. Any career must have academic achievements, everyone must feel nervous during the probationary period, but then the result of daily efforts is success. As a teacher, it takes a lot of practice and hard work to get the rewards for yourself. This job requires patience and a wealth of teaching experience to impart knowledge to students. Teachers have raised many generations of people to build the country, make the country more developed.
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person is a person who knows how to
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have academic achievements, everyone
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then the result of daily efforts is success. As a teacher, it takes
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practice and
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work to
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the rewards for yourself. This job requires patience and a wealth of teaching experience to impart knowledge to students. Teachers have raised
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IELTS essay Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society.

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