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Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society.

Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society. q515a
Yes, in my opinion, any job is useful to society but being a teacher is the profession that I find the most useful. We don't have to be well- known for something, we have to be a useful person. A useful person is a person who knows how to improve social and human life, help the country perfect and reach out to the world. Any career must have academic achievements, everyone must feel nervous during the probationary period, but then the result of daily efforts is success. As a teacher, it takes a lot of practice and hard work to get the rewards for yourself. This job requires patience and a wealth of teaching experience to impart knowledge to students. Teachers have raised many generations of people to build the country, make the country more developed.
Yes, in my opinion, any job is
useful
to society
but
being a teacher is the profession that I find the most
useful
. We don't
have to
be well- known for something, we
have to
be a
useful
person. A
useful
person is a person who knows how to
improve
social and human life,
help
the country perfect and reach out to the world. Any career
must
have academic achievements, everyone
must
feel nervous during the probationary period,
but
then the result of daily efforts is success. As a teacher, it takes
a lot of
practice and
hard
work to
get
the rewards for yourself. This job requires patience and a wealth of teaching experience to impart knowledge to students. Teachers have raised
many
generations of
people
to build the country,
make
the country more developed.
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IELTS essay Describe a job that you consider useful to society. You should say: • What is it? • The qualifications you need to do this job • What kind of people do this job? And explain why you think this work is useful to society.

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