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Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season.

Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season. m286q
Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season. Well, I don’t really have a preference, but if I had to choose my favourite weather, then I will pick the mild weather when a little breeze but a little bit hot to catch some rays and do swimming and recreation-related to water sports.
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today
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weather
is sweltering hot and has been
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so
humid. I
really
don’t like the humid
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weather
at all. I’m sweating
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so
much from humidity, and
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sometimes
, I
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get
a headache from the harsh sun.
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So
, the heatwave is
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so
unbearable here in
Consider using "summer".
the summer season
. Well, I don’t
really
have a preference,
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but
if I had to choose my
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favourite
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weather
, then I will pick the mild
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weather
when a
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little
breeze
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but
a
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little bit
hot to catch
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some
rays and
The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go swimming".
do swimming
and recreation-related to water sports.

IELTS essay Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season.

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