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Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season.

Actually, today, the weather is sweltering hot and has been so humid. I really don’t like the humid weather at all. I’m sweating so much from humidity, and sometimes, I get a headache from the harsh sun. So, the heatwave is so unbearable here in the summer season. Well, I don’t really have a preference, but if I had to choose my favourite weather, then I will pick the mild weather when a little breeze but a little bit hot to catch some rays and do swimming and recreation-related to water sports.

Actually, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :this day and agenowadays
today
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
 is sweltering hot and has been This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 humid. I really
 don’t like the humid You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
 at all. I’m sweating This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 much from humidity, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 a headache from the harsh sun. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
So
, the heatwave is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 unbearable here in Consider using "summer".summer
the summer season
. Well, I don’t really
 have a preference, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 if I had to choose my Possible spelling mistake. 'favourite' is British English.favorite
favourite
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
, then I will pick the mild You use this word too often, consider replacing it withclimate
weather
 when a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
little
 breeze This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a Reduce redundancy by using "little" or "bit".littlebit
little bit
 hot to catch This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 rays and The usual collocation for an activity ending in "-ing" is "go" not "do" or "play." Revise: "go swimming".go swimming
do swimming
 and recreation-related to water sports. 