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Nowadays, the Internet is used widely in education around the world. Some people say it is beneficial for teaching and learning. However, others claim that the Internet is bad for students' research skills and believe that its use should be restricted. I believe that use of the Internet it is still a valuable educational tool. Firstly, the Internet is widely used in the workplace and people's everyday lives, both for finding information, for personal finance, for keeping in touch with friends and family, for social networking and so on. Therefore, school students should learn how to use it correctly. In addition, students also need it for research in school and university subjects. Nowadays the most up-to-date information can be found on the Internet, rather than in books which can become out of date very quickly. Using the Internet is a convenient way of finding out information and developing independent research skills. However, the Internet has some negative aspects. For example, not all websites are reliable or contain accurate information In conclusion, schools and universities should teach students how to use the Internet by teaching them good research skills. If students know how to use the Internet effectively,

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