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I study an English, that is I study the Uzbekistan state world languages university. at the moment I am learning an English better. next year on march I will want to take an exam for the IELTS certificate. My university is in Tashkent. Tashkent is capital of Uzbekistan and it is located in Uzbekistan. Uzbekistan is a lovely place where located on the Asian continent. Because I love foreign languages that is why I learn them. At the moment I don't know any language completely but I believe I will learn an English and other my favorite ones perfectly in the future. the most popular subjects in my country are math, history and literature. our history is very famous and there are lots of historical cities and ancient buildings in our country. One of the historical cities is Samarkand. Our literature is also very well developed and there have been very famous novelists, great poets and statesmen in our literature. the math also like these. when I was young my grandfather used to tell me that I would read these books a lot.
I study an English,
that is
I study the Uzbekistan state world
languages
university.
at
the moment I am learning an English better.
next
year on
march
I will want to take an exam for the IELTS certificate. My university is in Tashkent. Tashkent is capital of Uzbekistan and it
is located
in Uzbekistan. Uzbekistan is a lovely place where located on the Asian continent.

Because
I
love
foreign languages
that is
why I learn them. At the moment I don't know any language completely
but
I believe I will learn an English and other my favorite ones
perfectly
in the future.

the
most popular subjects in my country are math, history and literature.
our
history is
very
famous
and there are lots of historical cities and ancient buildings in our country. One of the historical cities is Samarkand. Our literature is
also
very
well developed
and there have been
very
famous
novelists, great poets and statesmen in our literature.
the
math
also
like these.
when
I was young my grandfather
used
to
tell
me that I would read these books a lot.
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IELTS essay Describe is your studying

Essay
  American English
3 paragraphs
183 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.0
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