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Traditional culture yes or no

Traditional culture yes or no aVQYd

It is believed by some people of this generation don't like to keep the traditional culture of their country or area. Another belief is that preserving a traditional way of life is crucial. I think both points of view could be true depending on the circumstances. Regarding maintaining a traditional way of life, we should consider that science has advanced a lot over the years and our knowledge has increased so we know that a handful of our traditions are wrong and we shouldn't keep doing them, like using herbal medicines to cure illnesses. But at the same time, we have traditions that are so beautiful and interesting as well, such as holidays we have inherited from our ancestors such as Christmas. I believe that when we are aligned with anything in life, we should use the power of our brains and reckon and find out if it's appropriate to do so or not.

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keep
 the traditional culture of their country or area. Another belief is that preserving a traditional way of life is crucial. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reckonassumebelieveconsider
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