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Describe how the amount of road traffic has changed a place you know

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It is an undeniable fact that heavy traffic has changed a lot my local area. Since lots of vehicles are estimated to be caused a great concern, it would be noted as impact on peoples’ social life. In particular, in rush hours the significant number of transports on the main roads lead to traffic congestion for a period as a problem of locals to get their destination in time. Likewise other places our city has become nosier than over the past years because of high road traffic. In addition, dangers incident to drive have been increased and most of them with sad consequences of citizens. Nowadays the drivers break the rules more often in spite of strict surveillance and to be imposed by burden fine. Indeed, the private cars are in great demand as urban population are becoming more, yet the practical measures should be taken to eliminate the traffic jam in peak hours and the amount of noise pollution as well as the fatal incidents which cause of lost lives regularly.
It is an undeniable fact that heavy traffic has
changed
a lot my local area. Since lots of vehicles
are estimated
to
be caused
a great concern, it would
be noted
as impact on peoples’ social life.

In particular
, in rush hours the significant number of transports on the main roads lead to traffic congestion for a period as a problem of locals to
get
their destination in time.
Likewise
other places our city has become nosier than over the past years
because
of high road traffic.

In addition
,
dangers
incident to drive have
been increased
and most of them with sad consequences of citizens. Nowadays the drivers break the
rules
more
often
in spite of
strict surveillance and to
be imposed
by burden fine.

Indeed
, the private cars are in great demand as urban population are becoming more,
yet
the practical measures should
be taken
to eliminate the traffic jam in peak hours and the amount of noise pollution
as well
as the fatal incidents which cause of lost
lives
regularly
.
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IELTS essay Describe how the amount of road traffic has changed a place you know

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